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I thought so truly that beauty comes
Now I’m alone in the dark thoughts.
You are the only, who makes me smile
But You are afraid to see me, make me cry.

You gave me a solace, with warm words
And I’m embarrassed, I know so much now
I don’t want to be left alone with this
I still hope that there is a way

I haven’t been looking for You
Luck and interest moved us closer.
Days were too long
Nights were too short.
I felt in love with the vision
I felt in love with the sound.

Being from different worlds we are the one.
The way we talk, I feel that inside.
The feeling is honest, give me a chance
Nothing feels worse than your avoidance.

Now I’m standing on the road
Still hoping that the car will stop.
Dreams are not right
You will defeat your fright.

I believe.


Ostatnio ktoś prawie odszedł ode mnie, ja nie chcę aby tak się stało do końca pod wpływem emocji napisałem ten utwór, podejrzewam, że nie jest najwyższych lotów, ale ma wielką misję. Widzicie coś co można poprawić, zmienić? Błagam pomóżcie.